as i'm writing this, i'm trying to resist the temptation of submitting my text vaterlandschaft (fatherlandscape) to blauer salon. resisting, because i promised adrijana i would read something at lauter niemand tonight, and while i consider the text to be finished, some extra expert advice might still help. again, it's a one page only prose text that rhymes. i love rhymes. maybe, as a baby, i fell into some magic rhyme potion or something.